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Sensory language: try
to provide details that use each of the five senses
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Images that give tone/atmosphere to plot action
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Brief exercise:
Describe all of the things a character would see inside a room that
would scare them
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Use the setting to symbolize/represent – “Hills Like White
Elephants”
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Contextualize
the scene with need to know information, and save other details for later on, closer to when the background information is important to a scene.
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Diagram a
story for when the author presents information; how long do they withhold
information, and what do they “do” with that information in the ensuing scenes?
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Integrate a
detail into the plot by having the character do something that uses the
information.
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